E- What i see is that all of the little children are being taught english words and math.
X- That people are good at teaching little children and that the children can teach other what they know.
X- What i think they make us feel is to be proud of what teachers are doing in school’s to teach us.
Y- It is different to other film because they don’t have english people teaching africans so that they can teach other students.
S- Geel piet has just been attacked in the back alley by one of the policeman to find where PK is.
E- What i see is the Geel Piet looks dead because he has been attack by the mean policeman X- That white people can be mean to black people that just shows that people need to stop being mean to black people.
X- It makes us feel sad for the people that are being mean to all of the black people that we go to school with.
Y- They are different to other movies because in other movies because they always fight the same coloured people.
S-The village has been attacked by the police and all the buildings are just about all on fire.
E- What i can see is the most of the village is on fire.X- What a it is is like to have your place on fire.
X- Sad the fire has happened to all of those people
Y- They are different because QQ
S- Marie is standing in the crowned watching the boxing between PK and Gideon. She was watching PK.
E- What i see is that marie ius watching the boxing matchX- That female have interest in watching boxing
X- That white people and black people can box
Y- It is different to movies because they all have people fighting other people that are not the same culture.
Kia Ora Paris, thank you for promptly replying and posting this work for marking. I am pleased to see you have used the SEXXY scaffold to help you structure your paragraphs. Next time work on making the sentences flow together so that you could read it in one paragraph and it would still make sense. Also remember to edit, you are missing some capitals and have a few repeated words. 3/5
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