Introduction:
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2 ways to start off an introduction.
A Rhetorical Question
A Quote
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T: Title of the Book
A: Author of the Book/ Director of Film
K: Keywords from questions
O: Outline of your ideas
Question:
Describe one important moment in the text. Explain how that moment
changed at least one important relationship or character, supporting
your points with visual and / or oral language features.
- Shows that PK has respect for the Native Africans,
- PK cares for people regardless of their race.
- Pk loses his symbol of courage, family, guardian and his only friend
in the school
- PK doesn’t seek revenge against all Africanas- later dates Maria
- PK becomes braver and stronger, stands up to others, stands his ground.
Example Introduction
Have you ever experienced an event that changed your life? In
(A) John Avildsen’s (T) ‘The Power of One’, (K) a moment that changes the
main character PK’s life is when his beloved pet chicken ‘Mother Courage’
was strung up and killed by his schoolmates. (O) This is shown by the way
PK loses not only his chicken, but his symbol of courage and friendship,
his ability to not hold the actions of one against a whole race and how he
learns to stand up to people who are bigger than him.
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Statement
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Xplain purpose (why did the director do it)
Xplain the effect (how do we feel watching it)
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link to somewhere else in the film.
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Pk loses his symbol of courage, family, guardian and his only friend in the school
Have you ever experienced an event that changed your life? In John Avildsen’s
‘The Power of One’, a moment that changes the main character PK’s life is
when his beloved pet chicken ‘Mother Courage’ was strung up and killed by
his schoolmates. The character of PK is developed by this incident because
PK loses not only his chicken, but his symbol of courage and friendship.
He also develops the ability to not hold the actions of one person against a
whole race of people and to stand up to people who are bigger than him.
When Pk’s chicken ‘Mother Courage’ is killed, PK loses his symbol of courage,
his only remaining family and his only friend at school. In this scene, Borta the
school bully tries to blame the English for the killing of Africanas families in
concentration camps in South Africa. He claims that Hitler will punish the
English for their actions, and that he will punish the English too, starting with
PK by killing his chicken. He has the chicken strung up on a rope by its legs
and kills it by firing a stone at its chest using a slingshot. The chicken, ‘Mother
Courage’ was given to PK by the witch doctor as a guide to help him find his
courage and overcome his bed wetting. Therefore, when the chicken is killed,
PK’s symbol of courage is killed with it and PK will now have to be courageous
on his own. PK had also lost his father and mother, so the chicken was the only
family he had left when he went back to boarding school. In this way we see
the character of PK change as he learns to live without family and friends, and
find his own source of courage. This links to later in the film when his boxing
coach Geel Piet is killed by a guard and PK once again loses his friends and
family.
{L}- In this way we see that PK has lost his symbol of courage, is only family and his friend.
(L)-In this way we see the character of PK change as he has to learn to live without family
and friends, and find his own source of courage.
{L}- In this way we see the character of PK change as he learns to live without family and
friends, and find his own source of courage. This links to later in the film when his boxing
coach Geel Piet is killed by a guard and PK once again loses his friends and family.
Another way the character of PK is developed as a result of the death
of his chicken is that he is able to forgive and not hold grudges against
a whole race of people for the actions of a few. At this point in the film,
we see that the Africana boys hold a grudge against all English because
of the actions of some in the past. When they killed his chicken, PK could
follow their example and hate all Africanas because of Borta and his friends
, but he chooses to embrace people of different cultures and only blame the
person for their actions not the race. The director includes this scene to let the
audience know that PK as an English man will face difficulties from the
Africanas throughout his life. This links to later in the film when PK wants
to date Maria, but her father will not allow it because PK is English and
Maria is an Africana. PK chooses to date her anyway, because he looks
beyond a person's race.
Conclusion- MIRROR- reflect the points of your essay.
The event that changed PK’s life was when his chicken ‘Mother Courage’
was killed by Borta and the Africana boys at his school. As a result of this
incident PK had to learn to find his courage from within, to make new family
and friends, to treat all peoples with respect regardless of their race, and to
stand up for the things he believes in. In this way, we can see the importance
of this scene in the overall film.
What am i learning: I am learning how to write a eassy
How does this work show my learning: How to write a eassy
What am i wondering: Will i pass
