LO- Today we had to write about a dog, candle, broken window, ocean and a loaf of bread. Here is my work.
It was a hot sunny morning and my family had planned a picnic. Once we all woke up it was
12:30 and i was starving my mum had already packed all the food.
12:30 and i was starving my mum had already packed all the food.
After about 1 hour and 6 minutes later we arrived at a beach at a beach called Belleayre the beach had a lot o
f people there but we managed to find a space after like
a hour walk (well it felt like it) it was getting dark so mum lit the candlesticks don’t ask why she brung them and
i started to play fetch with my dog while my family were eating.
I threw the ball and my dog rosie
chased after it really fast and to no surprise she never have it back we were in a dodgy neighbourhood
now and i was lost.
f people there but we managed to find a space after like
a hour walk (well it felt like it) it was getting dark so mum lit the candlesticks don’t ask why she brung them and
i started to play fetch with my dog while my family were eating.
I threw the ball and my dog rosie
chased after it really fast and to no surprise she never have it back we were in a dodgy neighbourhood
now and i was lost.
I finally found rosie and i took the ball i threw it really hard for rosie to get i was mad i wasn’t thinking and it
hit a window it mustn't have been a strong window because i smashed the window.
hit a window it mustn't have been a strong window because i smashed the window.
I ran and ran for what felt like hours rosie was chasing after me she was fast. I obviously wasn’t thinking because
i thought i was lost and i wasn’t paying attention because if i listened carefully
i could hear the faint sound of the waves.
i thought i was lost and i wasn’t paying attention because if i listened carefully
i could hear the faint sound of the waves.
I followed the sound and eventually found the beach. My next challenge was finding my family amongst the crowd.
Eventually i found them,the expression on their face when i came back the first thing they said was
“where the hell were you” i decided i wasn’t going to answer and just started snacking out.
“where the hell were you” i decided i wasn’t going to answer and just started snacking out.
I grabbed a piece of bread from the loaf of bread and got out some Butter and some ham to put in my sandwich
and i also grabbed an apple and started snacking out.
and i also grabbed an apple and started snacking out.
Later on we had a run in the water i fell because i’m clumsy and the sea water was disgusting.

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